Kamis, 17 November 2016

ORDER LETTER AND COMPLAINING LETTER

ORDER LETTER AND COMPLAINING LETTER

Order  Letter
Definition
A letter of order is a document that confirms the details of a purchase of goods or services from one party to another. It usually includes more information about what you are ordering, like quantity, model number, or color, the payment terms, and the matter in which the products are to be shipped. When the recipient receives this letter, they will process the order and send the merchandise. 
An “Order” is an expense for the person placing the order and an income for the one getting it. But this is not all. The company that bags the order has to fulfill lot of commitments to ensure that it has a satisfied customer, which can be an individual or another company. Timely delivery of the order, quality of delivery and after sale service – are all part and parcel of getting an order.
An Order Letter is the one that is written by the person/company placing the request of purchase from another company. This letter comes into action only when a detailed study of the desired product has been done in the market and based on promised service, quality and price of the product, a decision for a purchase has been made.
An Order Letter should be drafted very carefully as it needs to pen down all the terms and conditions of the purchase for the benefit of both involved parties. It should have details such as product specifications, quantities, price agreed upon, delivery date, late delivery clauses, etc. It should be addressed to the person responsible for the execution of the order with a copy to the head of department. Since it is totally an official letter it should be typed.

Example

Mancini Kitchen Equipment
Troy D. Mancini
4220 Straford Park
Harold, KY 41635

Dear Mr. Mancini,

We would like to purchase twenty two (22) individual stand mixers (Model #43423), all in the color red.
We would like you to charge this purchase to the preexisting account that we have with you, business account #543234.
We hope to receive this order no later than Friday, November 11th, 2009. Attached to this letter please find our preferred shipping method and receiving address.
Please confirm that you received this order by calling us at 232-231-4563 anytime during business hours, Monday to Friday.
Thank you for your cooperation.

Keller Kitchen Co.


Complaining Letter
Definition
A Complaint letter is a request for an adjustment. In other words, it is a letter that describes about the damage; errors or mistakes happened to the delivered goods and therefore claims for compensation is known to be a complaint letter.
In modern age, the chain of business is not limited within the boundary of country. As business is expanding, its complexities are also increasing. So, mistake or fault is not a strange matter in the arena of business. There may be wrong delivery of goods shipment of obsolete, poor quality or underweight goods, faulty packing, delivery after the specified date and other damages to the goods shipped. In the above cases, buyer is supposed to suffer financial loss and therefore he has every reason to complaint to the seller demanding compensation. Hence a letter is used to serve such purpose is called complaint letter.
To draft such a letter, buyer must have valid grounds to explain that he has suffered financial loss or otherwise there will be misunderstanding which may damage business relation buyer requires special care with the art of convincing the seller. Clarity and courtesy are the important factors to write a letter of complaint. The complaint should be made politely without showing any sign of anger.
Causes of Drafting Complaint Letter or, Sources of Mistakes giving rise to Complaints. The following are usual causes for which a complaint letter is drafted:
1.             Problem with the delivered goods: If the goods that are delivered are :
Under weight,
Obsolete,
Defective,
Incomplete,
Not according to buyer’s specification such as color, brand, size etc.
Wrong or poor quality; then buyer can make a claim to the seller for the mistake.
2.             Pricing: If there is any mistake in preparing the invoice of the shipped goods, then such letter is written.
3.             Packing: Faulty or poor packing of the goods causes damage to the goods which can be claimed to the seller.
4.             Transport: Goods are supposed to be shipped according to convenience of the buyer. But if wrong carrier is used it may call for writing such letter.
5.             Terms & Condition: If the terms and condition of business are violated by the seller then such a letter is placed.
6.             Faulty Insurance: If insurance coverage is not made properly according to instruction of the buyer, then there may be claim through complaint letter.
On the above grounds, buyer can complaint but it must be in a decent and polite way.


Example

56 Disgruntled Street
Somewhere Unhappy
1AM MAD

Customer Service Manager
That Awful Company
Somewhere Awful
UR BAD
June 15, 2016

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing today to complain of the poor service I received from your company on June 12, 2016. I was visited by a representative of That Awful Company, Mr. Madman, at my home on that day.
Mr. Madman was one hour late for his appointment and offered nothing by way of apology when he arrived at noon. Your representative did not remove his muddy shoes upon entering my house, and consequently left a trail of dirt in the hallway. Mr. Madman then proceeded to present a range of products to me that I had specifically told his assistant by telephone I was not interested in. I repeatedly tried to ask your representative about the products that were of interest to me, but he refused to deal with my questions. We ended our meeting after 25 minutes without either of us having accomplished anything.
I am most annoyed that I wasted a morning (and half a day's vacation) waiting for Mr. Madman to show up. My impression of That Awful Company has been tarnished, and I am now concerned about how my existing business is being managed by your firm. Furthermore, Mr. Madman's inability to remove his muddy shoes has meant that I have had to engage the services, and incur the expense, of a professional carpet cleaner.
I trust this is not the way That Awful Company wishes to conduct business with valued customers—I have been with you since the company was founded and have never encountered such treatment before. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss matters further and to learn of how you propose to prevent a similar situation from recurring. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

V. Angry


Make a Letter of Apology Replacement Goods


PT. BINAMAN SEJAHTERA
22 Jl. Bumi Raya, Semarang 20002, Jawa Tengah
Telp: 023-567898 Fax: 023-123456 Email: binamanasejahtera@yahoo.com


November 7, 2016


John Smith
Purchasing Manager
CV. INDAH PERMATA
75 Jl. Muara Karang, Jayapura 22001
Irian Jaya


Dear Mr. John Smith,

I understand that your Magnaflux compressor from order letter no. 34P was delivered in an unacceptable condition. I will immediately ship to you a replacement within 14 days. Since I am embarrassed by this matter, I will discount the replacement order by 5%.  The difference will be credited to your account.
Since your satisfication is our goal, do not hesitate to call our company at 023-567898 if I can be of any further assistance,


Sincerely,



Nazaline Adinda Larasati
Marketing Manager
Encl.
Order from No. 34P

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